Feedback for Jefferson

The first one does a great job of using the negative space to provide contrast for the text. The one piece of feedback I'd have is that it might be a bit of a challenge to transition the text from your desktop design to the mobile design.

Also good positioning of the text on this one. The pattern on the background directly behind the text makes it a little hard to read "Burgerpants" because of how thin the typeface is so maybe think about using a slightly heavier weight.

Pretty much the same feedback as the first one. Just keep in mind the challenge of transitioning the text between those two positions when scaling